Thursday, 8 November 2012

Endeavour went in an incredible journey under the command of James Cook.

What has been you most incredible journey and in 20 words can you say why? 


9 comments:

  1. My Ferry trip to France

    The sea was rough, the boat was tilting side to side.2.5 hours was enough for me but it was fun.

    (I dont know how Captain Cook did three years at sea.)

    Millie

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    1. Great Millie our first journey, but can you describe your journey in just 20 words - not 21?
      Mr Schofield

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  2. My most Incredible journey was when I went to hospital for the first time when I broke my left arm.

    Harry

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    1. Harry, Can you add an adverb and or adjective to improve the sentence?
      Mr Schofield

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    2. My most incredible journey was when I was quickly rushed to hospital when I broke my left arm

      Harry

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  3. My most incredible journey didn't last very long from 20,000ft back down to earth in less than 4 minutes - INCREDIBLE!



    Miss Eccles

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  4. We have had the chance to look at your class blog today on our training day. it is really impressive and I will look forward to adding some more comments in the future.
    Mrs Gulliver

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  5. My most incredible journey was when I went to Latvia, it was inspiring to see how people lived there.
    Mrs Cook.

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  6. My trip to Romania many years ago.I went to teach English and work in orphanages.I have so many stories to tell but can't do it in 20 words. Amazing going on the overnight train through the Carpathian mountains. The journey back was sad however. Still haven't done it in 20 words. Never mind.Miss Graham

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